Everyone's a critic

Criticism by Taz

·         Missing Images

·         Clarify texts

·         Use less fonts

Criticism by me :)

·         Only 2 Images are currently present

·         Some text is unclear

·         Basic layout needs improving

·         The contents page needs serious maintenance on it as its dragging down the appeal of the rest of the magazine

Criticism by Juliette
Price has not been shown

·          Barcode on the front 

·          The subtitle's font is so difficult to read  

·          I don’t actually know what it says. Simplify maybe?

·          What is this magazine actually about? It's not immediately obvious on the cover, therefore lessening the effectiveness, because it could be about anything to manga to music to gaming or hardware :S

Criticism by Lauren

·         Price?

·         less fonts

·         Great colours

·         More pictures and text

·         Really like the DPS & photo

Criticism by Mr Nicole

·         improve the front cover layout

·         incomplete/ basic layout for the contents page

·         include more images

·         poor layout in the DPS as text is lost/ hard to read

·         DPS picture is not used to best effect with text

·         Include title

·         Text at the top is too long

Criticism by Mr Smith

·         sort out the fonts styles, columns etc.

·         Improve ICT skills

·         Improve the article (less comical)

·         Include price/ branding

·         Include more images

·         Masthead needs improving

·         post evidence of me using drawing tablet