Juliette Grieves- critic

I asked a friend of a friend to criticise my front cover- this was the results
1) Price? 
2) The issue is the only thing one the cover in that font, which is slightly odd 
3) Why is the bar-code on the front? 
4) The subtitle's font is so difficult to read I don't actually know what it says...simplify maybe?
5) What is this magazine actually about? It's not immediately obvious on the cover, therefore lessening the effectiveness, because it could be about anything to manga to music to gaming or hardware :S
But the picture? The picture is awesome.

I got a compliment I'm counting that as a win :)